unsaid,unspoken,untold.....

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Bruised,battered here i lay;
Wish i had something i could say.
Never ever did i feel so low,
Couldn't even ask you,why did you go??

Was it your smile or was it mine??
neither of us knew it had begun something very fine.
Never did i know it would haunt me forever,
Every memory,every recollection would make me suffer.

Smiling,which i once thought was the easiest thing to do.
To my dismay,i discover it can be tough too.
Humour,which seemed omnipresent once,is gone too.
Now the light has dawned,they were all because of you.

Now that you are gone,i look back and wonder
A beautiful distraction;"was it you who made me flounder"??
"no!!it can't be you"cries out my heart,
still confused as to why you chose to part.

A lesson learnt;some fingers burnt,
I still sit back and hope.
I wait for a miracle long overdue;
Memories of love;nothing but a distant hue.....

Comments

  1. Swetha BhagwatMay 31, 2010 at 2:21 PM

    cool...dedicated to someone, is it?

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  2. .. June 4, 2010 at 2:17 PM

    that's a real nice piece.....
    is it dedicated to miss......??

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  3. ice,water,vapourJune 12, 2010 at 3:19 PM

    yes!...thats a dedication 2 smthng i lost recently.....smthng wich i loved dearly,yet couldn't appreciate hw mch it was worth wen it dere...:-(

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  4. nishant nishiAugust 5, 2010 at 10:37 PM

    hota hai..bt lyf moves on..

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  5. Tele JaneJanuary 14, 2011 at 2:50 PM

    Love is optimism. :)

    * Like the flow of the poem.

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  6. ice,water,vapourJanuary 14, 2011 at 7:12 PM

    thanx tele...thats the sole poem I've written till date :)

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  7. UnknownSeptember 29, 2013 at 11:40 PM

    hey sir.
    m a junior from ur alma mater..
    knew u were a great quizzer but must say u r even better as a blogger!;)..tc

    ReplyDelete

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